Your presentation was good except for some interruptions.
ਹਉ ਜਾਇ ਪੁਛਾ ਸੋਹਾਗ ਸੁਹਾਗਣਿ ਤੁਸੀ ਕਿਉ ਪਿਰੁ ਪਾਇਅੜਾ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਮੇਰਾ ॥ (Raag Vadhans M. 4, 561-16).
Ho Jaae Pushhaa Sohaag Suhaagan Thusee Kio Pir Paaeiarraa Prabh Maeraa ||
I go and ask the fortunate, happy soul-bride, “”How did you attain Him – your Husband Lord, my God?””
ਮੈ ਊਪਰਿ ਨਦਰਿ ਕਰੀ ਪਿਰਿ ਸਾਚੈ ਮੈ ਛੋਡਿਅੜਾ ਮੇਰਾ ਤੇਰਾ ॥
Mai Oopar Nadhar Karee Pir Saachai Mai Shhoddiarraa Maeraa Thaeraa ||
She answers, “”My True Husband blessed me with His Mercy; I abandoned the distinction between mine and yours.
ਸਭੁ ਮਨੁ ਤਨੁ ਜੀਉ ਕਰਹੁ ਹਰਿ ਪ੍ਰਭ ਕਾ ਇਤੁ ਮਾਰਗਿ ਭੈਣੇ ਮਿਲੀਐ ॥
Sabh Man Than Jeeo Karahu Har Prabh Kaa Eith Maarag Bhainae Mileeai ||
Dedicate everything, mind, body and soul, to the Lord God; this is the Path to meet Him, O sister.””
ਆਪਨੜਾ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਨਦਰਿ ਕਰਿ ਦੇਖੈ ਨਾਨਕ ਜੋਤਿ ਜੋਤੀ ਰਲੀਐ ॥੩॥
Aapanarraa Prabh Nadhar Kar Dhaekhai Naanak Joth Jothee Raleeai ||3||
If her God gazes upon her with favor, O Nanak, her light merges into the Light. ||3||
I would be better if the presenter first presents his/her presentation and then a Q & A session follows on.
Dear S. Jagmohan Singh Ji,
Your presentation was good except for some interruptions.
ਹਉ ਜਾਇ ਪੁਛਾ ਸੋਹਾਗ ਸੁਹਾਗਣਿ ਤੁਸੀ ਕਿਉ ਪਿਰੁ ਪਾਇਅੜਾ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਮੇਰਾ ॥ (Raag Vadhans M. 4, 561-16).
Ho Jaae Pushhaa Sohaag Suhaagan Thusee Kio Pir Paaeiarraa Prabh Maeraa ||
I go and ask the fortunate, happy soul-bride, “”How did you attain Him – your Husband Lord, my God?””
ਮੈ ਊਪਰਿ ਨਦਰਿ ਕਰੀ ਪਿਰਿ ਸਾਚੈ ਮੈ ਛੋਡਿਅੜਾ ਮੇਰਾ ਤੇਰਾ ॥
Mai Oopar Nadhar Karee Pir Saachai Mai Shhoddiarraa Maeraa Thaeraa ||
She answers, “”My True Husband blessed me with His Mercy; I abandoned the distinction between mine and yours.
ਸਭੁ ਮਨੁ ਤਨੁ ਜੀਉ ਕਰਹੁ ਹਰਿ ਪ੍ਰਭ ਕਾ ਇਤੁ ਮਾਰਗਿ ਭੈਣੇ ਮਿਲੀਐ ॥
Sabh Man Than Jeeo Karahu Har Prabh Kaa Eith Maarag Bhainae Mileeai ||
Dedicate everything, mind, body and soul, to the Lord God; this is the Path to meet Him, O sister.””
ਆਪਨੜਾ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਨਦਰਿ ਕਰਿ ਦੇਖੈ ਨਾਨਕ ਜੋਤਿ ਜੋਤੀ ਰਲੀਐ ॥੩॥
Aapanarraa Prabh Nadhar Kar Dhaekhai Naanak Joth Jothee Raleeai ||3||
If her God gazes upon her with favor, O Nanak, her light merges into the Light. ||3||
I would be better if the presenter first presents his/her presentation and then a Q & A session follows on.